This is a slide presentation of the year 5s week. The reason its only year 5s this week is because the year 6s are on camp. We did lots of fun things witch you will see in my slide.
Harry, I think you did a good job on the backgrounds. The one problem with it is that your yellow text is hard to read and even though you picked great backgrounds some word were hard to read. Next time I would suggest you wright in a shape instead because it makes it easier to read. Over all I like your presentation Nathan
Hello Harry, I think you did a great job. But I think you could have done a little more writing instead of doing small just simple scenes you could have stretched it out a little and make it more interesting. I also think you could have worked on making a capital letter on Seba. I think you did an amazing job on your writing, good Job. Alivia
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Harry, I think you did a good job on the backgrounds. The one problem with it is that your yellow text is hard to read and even though you picked great backgrounds some word were hard to read. Next time I would suggest you wright in a shape instead because it makes it easier to read.
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Nathan
Hello Harry, I think you did a great job. But I think you could have done a little more writing instead of doing small just simple scenes you could have stretched it out a little and make it more interesting. I also think you could have worked on making a capital letter on Seba. I think you did an amazing job on your writing, good Job.
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